Tuesday 14 May 2013
Monday 13 May 2013
Liew Jiawen (06) - Martians V.F.W
Exposition:
Place: New york, Washington square.
People: Mr Cruthers, Martian V.F.W
Mr Cruthers: 200lb, enthusiastic and a great coordinator, organizing marches, locating floats and placing floats in their proper orders, barking commands.
Four million people watching the parade.
Development:
The ants appeared.
Ants: Head was a brilliant yellow, two large goggle eyes, burnt brown low slung abdomen, six feet tall. One ant approached and he appeared friendly.
Complication: The ants were not on the list of the parade. The ants threatened to sue Mr Cruthers if they were not on the list.
Climax: Everyone in the parade began to slow down.
Resolution: Everyone slowed down and came to a stop, including the boy. Manhattan Island had been cut down the middle and 4 million spectators were dead.
Tham Chun Leong (23) - Martians V.F.W
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EXPOSITION
Setting the scene, introducing characters/ background information
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The New York Parade marking the geophysical year was about to start.
Manager was a 200lb Mr Crethers, enthusiastic and great coordinator, organizing marches, location floats and placing floats in their proper orders, barking commands 4 million will watch the parade |
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DEVELOPMENT
The situation is developed/ more characters or information is introduced
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One hundred and fifty ants.
They wanted to participate in the parade.
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COMPLICATION
Something happens to complicate the lives of characters/ conflict is introduced
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Everybody and everything started to happen in slow motion, including the way the boy spoke.
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CLIMAX
A decisive moment is reached. Matters come to a head. Suspense can be high
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The boy’s father did not reply him even when he repeatedly ask questions to his father
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RESOLUTION
Matters are resolved and /or summed up. Some sort of satisfactory end is reached
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It was concluded through a radio signal that those people who had attended the parade had died and that the ents were killing the people with real guns.
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Gabriel_Teng (22) Martians V.F.W.
EXPOSITION
Setting the scene, introducing characters/ background information
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The NewYork Parade marking the geophysical year was about to start.
Manager was a 200 pound Mr Crethers, enthusiastic and a great coordinator, organizing marches, locating floats and placing floats in their proper orders, barking commands in washington square.
4 million people are watching the parade.
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DEVELOPMENT
The situation is developed/ more characters or information is introduced
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Mr Crethers’ jaw dropped in amazement as he saw 150 life-sized ants. He thought that the stress was making him hallucinate, seeing things.
One of the ants approached him in a friendly manner. He explains that he is part of the Martian V.F.W.s and their purpose there and requests that his group have a place in the parade.
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COMPLICATION
Something happens to complicate the lives of characters/ conflict is introduced
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A boy who was watching the parade with his father was very excited to see the Martian V.F.W.s pass by. when the Martian V.F.W.s have left, suddenly everything started to slow down.
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CLIMAX
A decisive moment is reached. Matters come to a head. Suspense can be high
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The ants’ communications officer described to their commander the success of the mission while their space ship hovered over the Atlantic.
He says the mission as accomplished, 4 million dead, super-isonic rays spread over Manhattan and that the advance team are awaiting further orders.
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RESOLUTION
Matters are resolved and /or summed up. Some sort of satisfactory end is reached
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The commander decided not to wait any longer decided to start the invasion.
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Martian V.F.W. (Koh Guo Feng - 13 - S2-04)
EXPOSITION
Setting the scene, introducing characters/ background information
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The New York Parade marking the start of the geophysical year is being held in Washington Square. Mr Crethers was in charge of the parade.
He was heavy, enthusiastic and was a great coordinator, organizing marches,
locating floats and placing them in their proper orders, barking commands to various staff.
4 million people will watch the parade.
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DEVELOPMENT
The situation is developed/ more characters or information is introduced
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Strange creatures appeared and surprised Mr Crethers. He thought the Martian V.F.W. were people playing a trick on him, but they had permission from his higher-ups to perform in the parade.
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COMPLICATION
Something happens to complicate the lives of characters/ conflict is introduced
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During the parade, the boy was bored of the endless stream of bands. He was then interested by the Martian V.F.W., dressed in their comical ant costumes, wielding toy ray guns. Both him and his father were laughing hysterically as they were extremely funny.
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CLIMAX
A decisive moment is reached. Matters come to a head. Suspense can be high
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In the boy’s perspective, everyone’s actions were becoming slower and slower. Suddenly, everything froze, and the parade came to a standstill. Perhaps everyone felt that way, that they were the only person moving in the crowd of unmoving bodies, but were actually already dead, which may be an effect of the isonic(?) weapon of the Martians.
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RESOLUTION
Matters are resolved and /or summed up. Some sort of satisfactory end is reached
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Martians were launching an attack on Manhattan, and the Martian V.F.W. were real martians acting as performers. All four million spectators were killed, and the Martians were moving in to cause further damage.
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